My Childhood

My Childhood

A Poem by Eve Ola

  My Childhood

The days when I just crawl 
The most precious moments I ever experienced
Being a first child is really an honour
Everybody loves you more than a great deal

They treat me as a super angel from above
When I was the reason for their smiles 
The most adorable toy for their peace and
Lot more kisses and hugs just for her

Everyone bought me more new toys 
With a lot more fancy dresses and shoes,
Few of them bought me fairy crowns
So a new princess in this photo town 

The birthday party when I was just 6 months
And grand gathering on my first big day
That time I was just crying with no feelings
But photos realizing me, I was more blessed

Tiny bony hands with nail paints
Splashy small eyes with more lights
Small pinky lips with red lipstick and
My fancy frock with princess crown

Ah! I am getting jealous of my childhood
So colourful memories I ever have
Uncountable blessings cheerful smiles
Tension free with senseless thoughts

These memories I want them back
Once I get them, I will kick off all the play buttons
Except the Pause one, so no more ages ahead and
No more tensions no more falseness!!

*My Childhood*


~AK~ 

© Eve Ola 

© 2014 Eve Ola


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Very cute. It is hard not to be jealous of our own childhood sometimes, life was so much simpler back then, and people just wanted to hold, love, and play with you. Well written dear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's sweet. :) the line
"adorable toy for their peace and
Lot more kisses..."
Shouldn't that be "and lots more kisses..."

I'm not good with poetry so I'm unsure if you meant it to be that way or just missed out the "s" at the end of lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great sentiments in this piece. fern's does not need an apostrophe, jealous OF my childhood, not WITH, other than that, a very relatable piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh crap, now you hit the rewind button in my head and all those memories are crawling inside me....
sweet...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eve Ola

9 Years Ago

haha nice. Thanks btw :)

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