"Aging into Legend"

The older you grow, the more you have to show.

"Its a wonderful experience when you age"

"because you break your mental cage"

"from what I can see"

"you've grown to be carefree"

"I find solace and inspiration in your growth"

"now I mus uphold my life-changing oath"

"The things that you've accomplished in life"

"Proved to me that people can move beyond strife"

"In your last days, don't worry"

"because I want to see you in a hurry"

"when your gone, I'll pass your story down"

"to ensure that your revered around the town"

Reviews

[ElizaB]

I like this very much.

It was a thought provoking piece and I especially like it because all that you have to say is condensed into three stanzas of great structure. You seem a natural if you ask me :)

[Thepensiveplayer]

thank you very much! I love writing like this often