survival

survival

A Poem by a bad habit

i am a warrior, alive, bruised, mutilated.
my swords are my teeth, and i  h u n g e r
for the violence, the pain,
the nectar of a storm
i am a warrior 
i rage before you

© 2024 a bad habit


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Your second line really shapes the poem and heightens the intensity.
Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The great warriors never dies. Excellent poem 👍

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 31, 2024
Last Updated on January 31, 2024
Tags: warrior, anger, storm

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a bad habit
a bad habit

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