She's The Sickness

meth-mouth rotten tooth shaved with a rusty blade
bitter blood decay grinding bone grafted by tainted spade.

crimson candy taste of death, swallowed shards of glass till
no epiglottal flesh was left, pimple pussing on his oozing facial cleft.

whistling whispers spill from his throat stoma sucking
through his sticky dried mucus mote.

scraping gonorrhea never hurt like this before; throbbing emblazoned
seeping from his orange-green dripping sores.

she licked his wound haunting never-more, regurgitating
ejected sputum sucked from his gaping sebaceous pores.

the piss was still flowing through a reused surgical hose, the foul
brown liquid filling slowly though his wounds were drying closed

bruised and beaten in every way, a few swollen remnants
of his testes carved up on the tray.

she snatched them up, chewing pop, pop, pop; the stale semen spurting
from her lips with a drip, drip, drop.

content with her supper she packed his black toe clippings in a jar
the smell of dying flesh wafting with the blood crusted scent of gar.

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

uuuummmm well... **gulps down my eeeewwww...** I have to congrats you on your word play... you create a very icky piece of FANTASTIC poetry!!! the flow and description mesh into a very cleaver piece... nice penning my friend!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Rasputin]

This reminds me of a William S. Burroughs story. The imagery is great- grim and disturbing, just the way I like it.

[Wretched Knight]

Excellent stuff. Great words. Graphic!

[rosemary keogh]

Really imagery great stuff.

[AK]

Omg! That's brilliant. Yeah, it may not be really pleasant but the imagery is mind blowing. Amazing use of descriptive words and a really good flow. Well done!

[Forevermore]

oh wow, this is something unique, something you cnt really put your finger on.
its graphic and detailed, i like it

[Andrea]

Very gruesome but does wonders for imagery. I like how very different this is. It's very catchy.