Screaming

Please tell me

Where did you go

Why did you leave

Why didn't I know

I thought you had

Your life figured out

You were always there

For everyone else

You were always laughing

No one saw you cry

You seemed so happy

Was it all a lie

Can't you see I'm crying

How could you do this

Why did you leave me

Was it something I did

Now I'm angry; screaming

You'd think could hear me

But don't you worry

It's only me. yelling at my mirror

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

I really loved the twist you put on this poem. Your message stayed solid and captured the attention well. I might ask one small note, forth line "Wy" was it meant that way or just missed the "h"? Nothing major still an excellent poem read. Hats off!

~Rob~

[faked.reality]

I fixed it now! thank you!

[Bohrium Guy]

:) Your welcome...

[Abeer Tarek]

That was so effortlessly beautiful! For some reason poems can be confusing sometimes (or atleast they are to me!) haha but you're truly talented and I loved every word! Keep up