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[dan]

Fallon, Don't you know how to post a poem on WC? Go to your profile page and open the "Writing" tab. then go to "Add Writing" and open that up. You will see a form, a template to fit your poem into. Copy and paste your piece where it goes...when you get that all filled in click save and it will come up, posted with all of your writings. It's kind of hard to read some of the words as it blends into the photo beneath it. Try doing that and see how it works. This short piece was so sad, children who are neglected have to start their lives already behind the 8-ball. So sad. Well written, though. (Should maybe be longer...but the confines of the photo don't allow for any length. That's a disadvantage.) Your writing is good, give it some room to breathe. take care...dan