Mamma mia...Angel in disguise

a poem on mother

 

 Angel you are and you will forever be

Your magical feathery touch
And mouth-watering dishes much
From our birth to your death 
Loved you we did, with all our heart
For you are our very breath

Love us you will 
Wipe our tears before eye's fill
Paradise lies at your feet
That is what god has decreed

You were love at first sight
Cuddling and caring
Stories of prince
In lullabyies you would convince

Bathing, cleaning and keeping us neat
Loving, caring, and tickling our feet
The ever-flowing love in your twinkling eyes 
The glow on your stunning smiling face
Your soft and soothing gown with a wonderful lace

Everything is a show
Nothing is going to be same tomorrow
Every new day you get older
But still breath-taking and beautiful
Your only fear is for one's near to heart
For you know one day you will depart

Life did not give you much 
Few bits of happiness and tons of pain
For being, a homemaker was a special task
You were strong so you put a great mask

Life to you 
Were moppet and munchkin
Yelling but still loving
Never did you say you were tired 
I without doubt admired
You never gave even a tiny cry
For you hid your tears 
But yours cheeks never dry

Value you we did
However, we were just stupid
I for one was a very naughty kid
There was never a huff
For all the troublesome and irritating things
After all, we were your darlings
We ask your forgiveness
For you are our richness

You are our life
Our reason of being
A great wonderful wife
We wish for your well-being
Our debt to you can never be paid
For you gave us too much 
For us to repay
Prayer and smile 
Safety and love
Good wishes for you my beloved
Mamma mia..My mother

Author's Note

Mamma mia means my mother..:)..please review and let me know what you think of it..thankyou..:D

Reviews

[Sakshi]

I can relate to this one so well, certainly cuz all Moms are just the same!
They all have selfless love for their children and they're always so protective!

thanks for taking me on such a beautiful emotional ride with this writing..
a few glitches here and there are already pointed out, so i wont re-type them!

a good read, overall.. thanks for sharing!

[Cerise]

Thankyou for ur kind words..:)

[Mark]

I lost my mother when she was only 45 to cancer. Nice poem, was a little long for me but brevity is a personal preference.

There were a few words I thought might be changed...

"Love us u will"
using a 'texting' spelling here seems out of place, I would suggest spelling 'you' out.



"In lullaby’s you would convince" you used a possessive form rather than the plural 'lullabies'

"Loving, caring, ad tickling our feet" ad should be and right?

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for pointing my mistakes..i must have not seen them....:)

[MOON]

Beautiful tribute to a mother.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D..am glad u liked it..:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"You never gave even a tiny cry
For you hid your tears
But yours cheeks never dry"
It reminded me so much of my mom and how she's struggled and how she has overcome. Thank you for sharing this with us (:

[Cerise]

I am soo glad you liked it..:D...Am so sorry for your mom..but i guess in some way or other every mom struggles to put a smile on her her face...:)

[quinfinn]

wonderful homage to your mother, nicely written and expressed with heart and soul

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words...:D

[quinfinn]

my pleasure

[Marie]

A wonderful tribute to a wonderful mother...

[Cerise]

It's a wonderful feeling to be reviewed by a great human like you. Thankyou. It meant a lot to me..:)

[Stanley Wilson]

nice poem mums reading this will just melt well written

[Cerise]

Thankyou soo much..:D...it meant a lot

[Jocasta]

I'm a mother and love this, you express a lot of emotions in your writing.

[Cerise]

Thankyou soo much for you wonderful words..it meant a lot..:D

[sierrasparks91]

amazing

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[Cherrie Palmer]

very uplifting I enjoyed reading it very much

[Cerise]

Aw..Thankyou soo much...your reviews mean a lot..:)