A DISCARDED JEWEL

A poem on how a child feels after being abandoned by her mother..Tons of questions with no one to answer...

There are days, when I wonder

Wonder where you are

Wonder where you went

Leaving me alone to defend

 

I hope you would come, every single day

A day is not easy to pass by,

I wish you would just come and say

Oh! My cupcake come here, don't worry

I know am late, I am so very sorry

When mama is here nothing to fear

My teddy bear, you are my dear

 

I wish you were there, In my childhood

Lulling me to a treacle chocolaty dream

A hope that you would buy me new toys

When, I did better than I could fare

The hope still throbbing in my heart,

Even after those precious years apart.

     

I wish you were here to comfort

Saying darling love, but never hate

The agony in my heart a part of me

Reminding me of a banshee

Why mama, Did you leave such everlasting pain

With no one to lean on to, or anything to gain

 

Oh Mama! What was your reason

To dump your newborn child

Oh Mama! why could you not take me along

Was, I a trouble even though so small?

How I wish you were here with me today

We could have stayed together

Forgiving each other, No need to betray

 

Today, I have every thing in my life

Except, a sense of completeness

A solitude resting deep in my heart

Reminding me of a wandering soul

That has neither pulse, nor a beating heart

No tears of blood, or happiness to depart

My wish for you is still the same

May you come home, safely putting an end

To this Heart-wrenching game

 

 

Author's Note

PLese let knoe know what you think of it..Thankyou

Reviews

[Shay]

very heart touching and has serious deep set emotions. i love it

[Cerise]

Thankyou for ur your kind words..:)

[Barbara Walker]

This really touches my hart, as my granddaughter and grandson had heir hearts broken by their Mom. Always waiting for her to show up. The many tears, it breaks my heart that they had to go through that. They are older now, but I know their hearts still hurt.

[Cerise]

Awww...well i hope that lord showers happiness in their life..:)...Thankyou for sharing..:)

[Barbara Walker]

thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Very powerful. Thank you

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[RachelReaper]

I love how you called the person "my cupcake" I thought that was sweet and adorable and I liked the whole thing all thew ay through. very nice job, you know your a talented writer.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for such wonderful words..:)..Thank you again..:)

[Beck Louise]

"Today, I have every thing in my life
Except, a sense of completeness
A solitude resting deep in my heart
Reminding me of a wandering soul"

This had me choked up haha, can relate to this and it was just perfect :)

[Cerise]

Awww...Thank you for such wonderful words..:)

[khalid]

i think it is really so nice poem. i have really enjoyed reading it
thank you for sharing..

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you for your kind words..:)

[ms. barrie]

This has such profound poignancy enriched in the beauty, vivid imagery of your words, that pulls at your heart, very deep, very sad. This poem, your words, lingers within you. This is a beautiful poem, exquisitely written. thanks for sharing

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you so much for such wonderful words..:)

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :)

[Tomi]

Sad, so sad. A mother's love is Indeed precious and you have expressed that eloquently and with passion. Beautiful Poem! well done!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind words..:)

[RawrsomeSami]

I love this.
It just... It's really touching. I mean, to read about this.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[RawrsomeSami]

You're welcome! c:

[David Scott]

There is no answer even if Mama comes "home". A good question. And a lovely poem. I feel sad when I read this yet hopeful fir the child expressing her pain.
Be well and write on...

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your kind words..:)