ENTWINED BY SOUL

Deep in my heart you will forever stay

Like the scars of our memories that lay.....

The thunder and lighting compatible like our chemistry

Like the heavy rain reminding me of our past history......

The pain in my heart is like a burning agonized flame

Rising and igniting until I erase the thought of your name.....

I miss the warmth and feeling of our soul entwined

The sunshine lighting your face and the sound peace......

If only they were reality and not a past

I guess there is no use fighting

You know you will be my last....

My soul will live with you in my thought

You know you are my true love knot.....

I know my life will go on

As long as I have you along...

So what if not in reality

I will survive with your fantasy.....

Author's Note

All comments are happily accepted

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

There is a fine line between romance and despair when love is unrequited, and both sides of the emotional tug of war have been evoked beautifully here...a lovely and powerful work :)

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)..it meant a lot

[Rene Velez]

well written with good lines, well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[Rita L. Sev]

A beautiful poem of longing...

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[Kiari Sabon]

very beautifully written as well as a beautiful meaning

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Kiari Sabon]

no problem :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This pulls at the heartstrings.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Praveeta]

A beautiful poem expressing your true feelings of love.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A very sad poem, written with feeling. Love however remains in our memory and imagination.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

BEAUTIFUL AND ROMANTIC! those are the two major things standing out in this piece.
It was well written, the rhymes were amazing and perfect as well.
I really enjoyed the read :)
Great write, and keep on writting :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you rhyme the first two lines, and put the verb at the end in L1

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[Laura Harrison]

Such a beautiful piece, keep up the good work :)

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)