Perfect Choice

Perfect Choice

A Poem by Cerise
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Love story

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My life was a mistake until I met you

Everything would fall into place, I had no clue

All my sorrows and pains were washed

One look at you and I was so lost

The day I met, I knew in my heart

That you are my life and I can’t stay apart

You are my biggest wish come true

I thank god for sending you out of blue

My decision of you was completely right

I chose you, which was perfect and wise

With everyday my love for you shall rise

You are truly my angel in disguise.....

 

© 2014 Cerise


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Oh my gosh. Words will never share the depth of love I have for this. This brought a smile on my face. It is short and filled with love and affection. The rhyme and beautiful flow made it easier to read and never distracted me from my reading. The title caught my attention first. It had my mind racing with different thoughts before I clicked on it. I am glad that I chose your poem to read tonight. It kept my mind and heart at ease. Its soft and sweet tone is comforting like a lullaby. I like the first word all the way to the very last word. There isn't anything that I didn't like about it. I am impressed! I hope that whoever that this maybe having you under their spell, that everything works out well and that you two will share a happy ending together. Well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Cerise

9 Years Ago

Awwwwww.....this is the best review ever..thaaank you so much for taking time to read my peace..am s.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) you are very welcome my dear friend.



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A lovely tribute to your love..
Soft and well written.

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Beautifully done hun, enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
"I choose you" Such powerful words my friend .Love is a many splendoured thing they say and it is especially when you have the person in your arms :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Love can be heavenly cause the one we love becomes an angel on Earth for us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Wishful thinking or hopeful reality. Either way a splendid poem...:).........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much..:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).............................

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Added on March 15, 2014
Last Updated on March 17, 2014
Tags: love, soulmate, together, perfect

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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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