Commands.

Commands.

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

   Commands

 

"Shhh, be quiet.""

 

"Hush up now, I've had enough."

 

"Just leave me alone, leave me alone!"

 

 

I tell the voices in my head.

No response to my pleading.

They carry on.

 

Funny.

They can tell me what to do,

but they never listen to me.

I have no control here.

 

 

 

"Do it, do it now!"

 

 

"Do it, do it now!"

 

"Kill her".

 

They scream at me.

Commands.

Ridiculous commands.

I don't want to do that.

This isn't me?

I do not take life away from life.

.

.

.

I refuse.

I refuse.

I refuse.

.

.

.

But wait...

If I do this, will you stop?

.

.

.

Worth a try.

.

.

.

I plan to kill "her" quickly.

I don't want pain.

I don't want suffering.

 

The voices are getting to me now.

So, I do what they command.

I kill "her".

I kill myself.

No more voices.

 

 

 

© 2008 Fear Corrupts!


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nothing wrong. it was a really great poem. had me going straight til the end :)

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