Caught in a Death- Net

        Caught in a Death-Net.

 

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Loss of control.

Neglecting myself.

Reckless & marvellous.

Above & beneath help.

 

" Smudged make up.

  & Sloppy hair.

  Incoherent commands.

  Getting me nowhere "

 

Trying to move,

In a spiders web.

Caught in a net,

& left for the dead.

 

Stuck in myself,

selfish as hell.

Maladaptive.

& without cries out for help.

 

Trying to move,

Though I'm consumed.

Penetrated by no one,

except for myself.

 

Stuck in my head,

With no escape.

Lost in a world of no control,

Filled with anger & hate.

 

" Smudged make up.

  & Sloppy hair.

  Consumed with myself.

  & moving nowhere "

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Author's Note

Will edit this later, add text colours, fix spelling errors, add a picture, remove/add points, etc. Do tell me what you think though.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

i like this. neat.

[~angelalala~]

i like this poem. good imagery "Smudged make up. Sloppy hair. Consumed with myself. Without a care." i like this stanza. the feeling of being stuck, caught in a rut. very well written.