Go Ahead & Rape Me.

                    Go Ahead & Rape Me.

 

Take control,

  go ahead,

& Set me free.

Do what  you'd like,

 go ahead,

& Rape me.

 

         Come on! ; Hold me down,

                 go ahead,

         & Restrain me well.

         Come on! ; Don't let me go!

                go ahead,

          & Hold me in hell.

 

I'm telling you; Beat me silly,

  go ahead,

& Knock me out.

I'm saying, Feel no guilt,

  go ahead,

& Ignore my shouts.

 

                Babe, slash my face,

                      go ahead,

                & Bathe in my blood.

                Babe, tear me to pieces,

                     go ahead,

                 & Start a flood.

 

I'm saying, Do what you'd like,

   go ahead,

& Have a ball.

Come on ! ; Distract me well,

  go ahead,

& Take my fall.

 

                              Rape Me.

    

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Needs work...

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The title initially intrigued me when I saw it. This is incredible!!! Very poetic but tragic as well. I know you said it needs work, but there's a great foundation here if you're choosing to continue with it. You have an incredible flair! I will definitely be reading more! Very talented!!!

[funeralmoon]

i liked it.. you reveal life situations in such a flowing manner.. i like it good work.

[Madworld]

Um, well this is different?
It's kind of captivating, in a way though ( if I must say).

Neat.

[Goat]

I liked it. I kinda don't wana say this but it made me smile sounds weird

[AshCat]

well,
its a very powering poem in a way.
an incredible poem.

good job

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Intense... really graphic but exciting to read wow you knocked my socks off

[Amberlee]

wow is all I can say. I've experienced the pain of the subject and it was definatly breath taking the way you went around writing about it. Great read.
~Amber~

[Blackbirdsong]

I wasn't struck by this needing work in any way. The rawness of this write and the powerful message work well in the format you've chosen. I find it funny that some of your reviewers chide you for this rawness as if all poetry is supposed to be dripping with honeysuckle sweetness. I don't know if this poem is about you, but unlike others I don't assume that anything one way or another. I've often had people wrongly assume that everything I write is about me. I find this funny since there is such a thing as imagination along with the ability to have enough empathy to write something from someone else's point of view.

So anyway I like the raw energy, anger and power of this write and I applaud the strength and skill it took to write it.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Unless you are going to make this poem a little more easier for the young lady who used distrub in a review so many times. I don't know how to review this poem because if this is an actual event from your past then prayer is what is needed not a review. If this is a metaphor for someone mistreating you outside of the bedroom than this was an amazing piece. Sorry for the confusion but I don't know what is driving this piece.

[ThereWasBloodEverywhere]

:| ?

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

This was actually very disturbing.

I'm still a little disturbed.

I think I need to go get undisturbed.

I've never said that word so many times in one review, but my God...

Are you okay??