Is this life for me?

Sat on my boat and looked at the water
thought where do I belong
here and or there?
In this life I am here and in that life I'd be there
pushed my foot against the sand
set out for the water
away from comfort and safety
ready to give up my life
the water will look after me...
after-all I am dead
there is nothing left for me here
They have all came and taken what they want
there is nothing left for me here
after-all I am dead

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[Neon]

after-all I am dead
there is nothing left for me here
They have all came and taken what they want
there is nothing left for me here
after-all I am dead

What a great ending! lovely poem! I love the time the most I loved mine! Currently, am working on a book that's too based or about life so, this poem's crazy awesome to learn something from you through this beautiful well structured poem.

Keep writing!