Imperfectly Managed Part 2

Imperfectly Managed Part 2

A Poem by ferousfinite

'Imperfectly Managed - Part 2'

"Our eyes to see
A human to be
The trees are for us

but we just discussed
all perfectly managed
If we are the best

then why do you fail
why do you cry
why are you pale

you think its the End of this tale
no it can not be
because it must start."


© 2013 ferousfinite


Author's Note

ferousfinite
The Age of Man is merely the ability to take what is available and make it better.

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haha...you can't correct me enough....but you tried its sweet^^

and so sorry for reviewing after three week...pardon me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For you Glitch! =) ............................

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 11, 2013
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