Lost in Your Name

Lost in your name

I find myself over again.

Like a dream always

right there on my mind.

How everything made sense

even though I wanted more.

 

I was quite happy 

you made me that way.

There is no excuse

to morn this lengthy past.

Still in the night

I wait for some sign.

Stopping in a moment

to finish my whole thought.

What a beautiful time,

I always remember your smiles.

Just listening to everything;

the wind, rain and thunder.

Hoping one day again

to hear your soft voice. 

Cuddled warm and tight,

staring at the TV reminiscing.

All I can think of

right now is your love.

Reviews

[Neon]

"There is no excuse,
to morn this lengthy past.
Still in the night, I wait for some sign."

Nice phrase. I'd written a poem the months earlier where i'd penned a lined "I get lost in your name!" Something like this! So, you now remind me about my that poem even the time since I was on this site n enjoyed writing n having reviews from you all friends.

The writing structure's new to me this time, i'd read some of your earlier writes since I was here they were nice but now I can see the new creations in you come with to express the feelings of your heart.
Great job!

Your skills grown!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

There is no excuse
to morn this lengthy past.
---
did mean just as this was written...
or ---

There is no excuse
to mourn this lengthy past.

this like the other seems to reflect ---
hardship in relationship...

[ferousfinite]

THIS, like this relates to you and by using THIS, this piece may perhaps shed some light within you, relating to the story.

[stars are far]

that was really very good written ..
and the unforgettable love..yeah..it hurts ,thinking about someone who doesnt even think about you hurts..
well done :)

[ferousfinite]

Thanks for a great review! =)

[ferousfinite]

In this piece I am giving the reader firsthand experience and creating a place in time to remember. Perhaps you will relate...

6 - Haiku; 4,5

[Neon]

Yet, I don't know much about how to write haiku's. sonnets n at all. I remember you'd send me a link of how to write shakespear sonnets but due to much work I couldn't grab some time to read that one but i'll try if I get some time to.

[ferousfinite]

Here is an old Haiku... I learned how to write poetry using this old japanese haiki:

Blooms of red against the blue sky
cherry blossoms everywhere

Review the Original Poet, the MASTER of Haiku: Matsuo Basho!
http://thegreenleaf.co.uk/hp/basho/00bashohaiku.htm

I find that Taoism philosophy has boosted my ability to channel my thoughts into words with less junk in the way (junk is the world). To cover my path; read two books: http://www.amazon.com/The-Tao-Pooh-Benjamin-Hoff/dp/0140067477 - and - http://www.amazon.com/Te-Piglet-Benjamin-Hoff/dp/0140230165/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1393527015&sr=1-1&keywords=the+te+of+piglet+by+benjamin+hoff - Read these two books and you will become a new person... I promise you and ANYONE that after you understand what Hoff is conveying, your mind will be changed for the good.

Don't be a Busy Backsoon =) be the wu'we' of the Great Nothing!