Sanity

Sanity

A Poem by Loveless

Footsteps up & down the stairs, looking for what wasnt there, help me out cant help myself, my mind is running all around.
Notice that im not sane: claws scrathing inside my brain,
help me out cause theres no way down.
Footsteps up & down the stairs looking for what wasnt there. all sanity seems to creep away
hearing things
that no one says.
cant get to sleep through the night,
all my head will do is fight.
Help me out cause theres no way down!
trapped in the darkness of my brain:
sometimes i wish i was sane.
Get me out cause i cant get out, get me out.

© 2013 Loveless


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Loveless
I do not own the image, its not mine

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I felt the trapping of darkness...Bravo................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Loveless

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I appreciate it!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
Love the writing, makes my stomach turn. loved it :)

-Bliss

Posted 10 Years Ago


Loveless

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! Its greatly appreciated!!
gorgeous poem, it has a nice flow and describes your feelings very well, it really captured my attention.
Well penned :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


annabellee

10 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
Loveless

10 Years Ago

:D
Loveless

10 Years Ago

:D
This accurately describes myself. Thank you for the self reflection ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Loveless

10 Years Ago

Hehe no problem! & thank you!^^
This accurately portrays the morbid confusion of losing one's mind. Nice job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loveless

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! its greatly appreciated! :D

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Added on July 6, 2013
Last Updated on July 27, 2013
Tags: Sane, Insane, Help, Get me out, Out

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Loveless
Loveless

san bernadino, CA



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