Im here, so who are you?

Somebody told me that I wouldn't be great and 

in an instant I put the reciprocal into my mind 

and applied it to my race 

changing my focus, strength and pace

nothing could rearrange the gain 

that placed the chains on me 

Screaming "Love GOD" I felt the destiny

Satan couldn't ever get the best of me 

Who is he? to think he strong 

when my GOD planted power 

over the world this long

Reviews

[Sherri Moshman Paganos]

Enjoyed this a lot. Powerful poem -- role of God. Liked the determined voice. Strong use of language and good use of rhyme for emphasis.
S.

[A-TRIP2LIVSmind]

THIE IS POWERFUL, ZEALOUS

[David Scott]

There is anger here... Yet Faith seems to be the theme.
God is great! God is good!

[Southern_Writes]

WOW very strong context. Enjoyed this.