Metaphysic

Metaphysic

A Poem by James Paulin
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Abstract

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Metaphysic

 

 

Is

 

Infinity, eternity   

 

Order - chaos, velocity - symmetry

 

Magnetism - polarity, light - blackness

 

Energy - vacuum, essence - insignificance

 

Infinitesimal - intergalactic, invisible - universal

 

Absolute - evolution, quantifiable - imperceptible

 

Extraterrestrial – subatomic, dimensions – paranormal

 

Spiritual - material, cosmology - nanotechnology

 

Unity - change, gravity - relativity

 

Perception, logic, hypothesis

 

Ignorance, discovery

 

Revelation

 

Is

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Thank you for entering this in, "Be Experimental," it reads really well, when I first looked at I didn't think it would flow, but it does. It also has that aesthetic appeal, the words and the way they are written across the page make a wonderful pattern.

I've said this to all the entries, but yet again what I expected people to enter in my comp has yet again been exceeded by a mile!

Great write

AHouseOfChambers

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Enjoyed reading. Interested in reading more of your writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly appreciated this vocabulary and concept. You are one of the strongest conceptual poets I've read in a long time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fabulous. very good style. u describe metaphysics perfectly. the entire idea spanning across the entire human phsyche

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paranormal being my favorite :)
cool write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had to look deeper and really look for the correlations and relationships of the words you used. Very good. I like the implications in each line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for entering this in, "Be Experimental," it reads really well, when I first looked at I didn't think it would flow, but it does. It also has that aesthetic appeal, the words and the way they are written across the page make a wonderful pattern.

I've said this to all the entries, but yet again what I expected people to enter in my comp has yet again been exceeded by a mile!

Great write

AHouseOfChambers

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is definitely one of my favorites!!! I really love the pattern and shape of your writing!! I also more than enjoyed the topic and message!! Great Job!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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