Intuitive

Two questions

 

will yes

offer kindness

simply

to provide instead of take

 

forgiveness

treats the wound

that is impossible to unmake

 

will yes

visualize harmony

when silent

views blur opaque

 

peace prevails,

enmity fails,

if denied

intolerance for supremacy’s sake

Reviews

[ATG]

This was an interesting read. It flowed very well between stanzas. I also enjoyed the unique choices of rhyme. Overall, a good read.

[Legion]

I like this. That second stanza is my favorite. This could go so well describing a relationship of some sort or politics or even religious differences. Kudos.