blu

blu

A Poem by James Paulin

 

true precedes one tint of blue

soft as powder in sky pastel

azure to aqua, water view

baby is light and rich royale

iris, cobalt, electric hue

turquoise or topaz accent well

periwinkle fresh, like a dew    .

favored in nature, sight will tell

color of sad is cheerful too         

© 2010 James Paulin


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This is good. Blue is my favorite color and you described it well

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very cleverly written. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i admire the color blue and i see you do too! :)
nicely written poem and the last line is great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very beautiful. the last line is genius. loved each line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is about as much fun as a poet is allowed to have on one page...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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