Ten to Love

Ten to Love

A Poem by James Paulin

Spring

Flowers

Gentle rain

Red bird refrain

Sweet dreams with sound sleep

New robins as they cheep

Pan fried walleye in batter

Baseball team with support chatter

Opera divas in full range voice

Fall crispness with colors of natures choice

© 2010 James Paulin


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I'm loving this, rhymes are good!
Read mine? I've also entered into the contest.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nicely written, jp

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That'a a really beautiful Poem!
What you like atually is what us love.
So I can relate to this really much!
Graet Work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beatiful indeed ~L

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very nice, and in Etheree form too. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a good catch to me

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 4, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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