the dreamer

the dreamer

A Poem by James Paulin
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WOTD "susurrus"

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his songs luminous

lyrics echo, susurrus

to ingenuous

 

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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I like these so much!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem which really captures the lyrical/musical power of dreams

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Remarkable Write! So creative

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A radiant murmur of creative brilliance!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sibilant sing song
susurrus chorus for us
all our souls porous



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on December 8, 2010
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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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