perfectly perfect

perfectly perfect

A Poem by fitz Roberts

I bet you bought that perfect smile cutest dimples. Perfect skin soft smooth no wrinkles.

Perfect shape perfect style perfect personality. Perfect weight perfect mile you run down to your own perfect beat.

Who are you than when your perfect all the time.i bet even you can perfectly unwind.

Perfect must be hard to do I'm pretty sure it's perfectly easy for someone like yourself.if you get tired just try to be perfectly normal like everyone else.

© 2015 fitz Roberts


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Wow, lot of perfection in there; made me think about how women are photoshoped in magazines; I liked the theme and the ending is a slammer! Great writing and keep it up. Emily put us together; humm, I suppose let me know something. Kinda nervous. Well more than that. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


fitz Roberts

9 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed that's great I like your vision of it I just write what comes to me c.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Wow, thanx to you. Emily said there's no time limit, but if you think of something, let me know!

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Added on January 20, 2015
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fitz Roberts
fitz Roberts

warner robins, GA



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I like to write hope you enjoy how I paint a picture with words 27 you old male hoping to be a decent writer Lol more..

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