MY WORDS OF LOVE

MY WORDS OF LOVE

I have no choice; I have lost my voice.
I cut myself to bleed my feelings out,
dripping love onto the paper below,
bestowing upon it a crimson glow.

I’ve bled these emotions for you.
The letters sing a passion’s song,
words that resonate through and through.
May they lead me to your warm heart,
into your embrace so tender,
nestled beneath bird’s lush feathers.

Now I want you to see, what it is you mean to me,
so take this written word and rest it on your chest.

Open yourself and dispense your fears,
let the words caress your body and soul,
they carry a message you should hear:
“I want you to know, ‘I love you’
your rapture keeps me alive,
without its fire, I would die.”

Author's Note

Winner of - The Best Of Love - in the following contests,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Make-Me-Believe/11196/

Reviews

[Awdures]

Oh to be in love! It's written with warmth and genuine depth of affection for your muse. You're resilient to let yourself open up to it but resigned to the fact that you're possessed in such a sweet manner. I adore the inner struggle here.

"Now I want you to see, what you really mean to me"

I wrote something very similar to someone as blind as a bat lol. I hope you have more luck than I!

Beautiful and deep Ivan. Keep them coming :)

[Crowley]

Great....I just hope it doesn't end in a mess of dried blood and paper. This was painful in its desire, and exhausting in its scope. The amount of energy and focus it takes to show someone how much you love them is astounding, and I think you really laid that out here. Nice write, I loved it.

[R E Tree]

This is powerful and emotional write. I like poems wih every line full of emotion it makes the poem sound deep and meaningful to the reader. The words you have used are captivating it makes the poem sound so impressive and romantic in way that your expressing how much you love somebody. I think this has a sweet and gentle tone and it's one of my favourites from you

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Written with a very genuine voice,and with so much of love..you write with a gentleness and also a certain passion and desire here,both are contradictory styles but you blend them both.I love the lines,Open yourself and dispense your fears,
let the words caress your body and soul,
they carry a message you should hear:
“I want you to know, ‘I love you’
your rapture keeps me alive,
without its fire, I would die.”
I absolutely love the line,open yourself and dispense your fears.If only,one lets go of fear then only he or she can love without any restraint..and allow themselves to be swept away by simple emotion of love.

[Adelia Alighieri]

May they lead me to your warm heart,
into your embrace so tender,
nestled beneath bird’s lush feathers.

I loved these lines. Thanks for sharing. Kudos.

[Coyote Poetry]

Written like a beautiful letter. Words that leave the heart content for a lifetime. Each sentence making the poem more complete. I love the ending. A true poem of love and great desire. A outstanding poem.
Coyote