DO YOU REMEMBER ME?

DO YOU REMEMBER ME?

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

DO YOU REMEMBER ME

Shh…listen…


Do you hear me in
the whispers of the wind -
Where my dreams of you
sleep tucked away
in the softness of summer?


Do you see me beneath
the rainbow of the waking sun -
Caressing you with
the warmth of my smile,
as the morning birds sing hello?


Do you feel me on
the rose of your cheeks -
The memory of my lips
kissing love into
the oasis of your dimples?


Do you dream of me
lying next to you in bed -
Holding you in my arms,
touching your heart with mine,
as I say “I love you”, one last time?


Do you still remember me?

© 2010 FlawedByDesign


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excellent choice of words..sounds more like a love poem for the "someone".. heart-achingly beautiful ! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I do remember...are you my stalker?

Posted 9 Years Ago


You can tell that you/writer/character is craving the attention of the girl he loves and you can feel the passion that he gives of for his sweet Jane doe! I really like it I think anyone can relate to this poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can so relate to this. I think that when intimacy has occured btwn people it can never be completely forgotten.whether it is remembered with joy,sadness,or hatred it leaves a mark on our respective souls that turns us into who we truely are. Very nice job on this one. Especially like "do you see me beneath the rainbow of the waking sun" Love should be filled with rainbows and laughter.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem is delicate and flows smoothly. The ache that the narrator feels wanting to know if that person still thinks of them: still care for them in some way is carried on to the reader. It allows the reader to walk in the narrators shoes. The words you picked to use for this poem paint beautiful imagery and letting the reader full experience this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is achingly lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such a deep tenderness to this aching, touching, emotive whispering... utterly beautiful and totally fabulous...I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


LIKE THE WAY...
THE QUESTION IS SOO UNIVERSAL...
EVERYONE HAS THIS MOMENT...
AND THAT LAST STANZA...
WAS SO BEAUTIFUL...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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