Goldenheart

my attempt at a song, it needs major help

Lay your head on my shoulders
Goldenheart
All those things that they told u don't mean a thing
Goldenheart
rest your head on my shoulder and remeber your older
Goldenheart

Forget about the past
Goldenheart
Let your tears flow freely
I'll be here to wipe them gently
Goldenheart

Give yourself over
Let the pain come in slower
Goldenheart

Feel my love and comfort
Wrap around you like a coat of arms
All those things that they told you
are wrong.
Goldenheart

Reviews

[Pikey.B*****d]

very beautiful words, I remember when you wrot these words :-)

[Pikey.B*****d]

very nice!