Night Walker

Sometimes my mood can only be changed by the blues...

 

It seems like in those days

I became weaker with every

eye glance across your face

thin, shiny, black lace

draped snuggly against

the sweetest temptations known to man

 

you are the

vixen of my mind…

and.. hellcat to my heart

you snagged my life substance

with pearly whites under

black fishnets and leather heels

 

you danced the devil’s dance

twisting my salvational thoughts

into sinful appetence of needs

that boiled over from my chest

cascaded in my throat

I spoke in tongues of

wicked salaciousness that

filled my bloodless veins

 

I gave in as if

I was tissue and you were

raging water waves that drenched my soul

with brimstones soaked in flames

 

I was sinfully weak for you

I gave into your way

a mad man possessed by love

I let go of all humanity

dove face first

into the blackness of  your abyss

drowned myself in your ambrosias

as your teeth sunk into my throat

 

forever damned to the

pool of darkness

lost to the light of days

a night walker desiring

to be human again

only to relive that night

you sucked my virginity away

Reviews

[Shadow]

Hmm I'm not sure if this is meant to be a poem about giving in and not be ecstatic about the results or if that's just the way i'm reading it....temptation and all it's glory and strife is a powerful thing and the man in this poem experienced a tidalwave of it and perhaps does regret it but chooses to relive the moment of his own will.

Truly fascinating write i'll be mulling this over for awhile
good write and good night

[lilain]

OMG! This is stunning, Flow! It is dripping with images... beautiful, dark images. This is so different, at least it strikes me as different from your other works. And while your other works are wonderful, it is exciting to see a diversion from you. Beautiful job. The message, the images, the writing, the choice in words is gorgeous.

[Melon Choly]

Temptation....what it will do to us....where it will lead us.....what we will do for it.

Very nice write, to me it shows of the man who gave in to his tempation, and seems to have regrets, yet lives the event over and over in his mind.