Drowning

this is basically just a poem of how i've been feeling lately

Drowning in a pool full of darkness

Yet no one is there to save me

Not in the sense of not having friends

Because I do-

But in the sense of where it’s driving me crazy

I feel empty

Like nothing even matters- Even though I know it does

I just don’t want to be alone

I know I’m not alone

But my brain doesn’t understand

That my heart knows what it wants

And as they’re battling with swords

I sit here blank

Not knowing what I’m saying

Not really sure how to react

I’m just…empty

Waiting for the darkness to fill up my lungs

and surround my soul

 

Author's Note

honestly you might get confused somewhere in there, but that's just what was on my mind so please read :)

Reviews

[Nemesis G]

I liked your poem, although for me it didn't flow as well as I would have liked but it was straight from the heart and in the end that's all that matters. Poetry is all about how we feel and experience things, well done it was a good poem.
Remember though your not alone.