The life of a blissful imagination

The life of a blissful imagination

A Story by Sarah
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A story of which a young girl was yearning to have her dream as her reality.

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As I walk I hear the soft sound of waves crashing along the beach beckoning me to feel at peace. I smile softly as I feel the sand squishing between my toes. My hair flowing carelessly through the wind. Watching the sun slowly ascend into the horizon from afar. Sighing joyously as I admire the beauty of the landscape around me. Cutting loose of all the heavy weight others have placed upon my shoulders. In this moment of time forgetting all the sorrows and regretments of the world. Throwing away the fake smile I have used as a mask to hide the pain and expressing my real one. Savoring the last few moments of the warm sun beaming on my skin. Seeing the sunset reflect off of the crystal clear water. Hearing the sound of the water crashing along the rocky pier. Imaginging sharing these admirable moments with my one true love some day bringing happiness to my saddened heart. Wanting this moment to last forever but waking up from my beautiful dream to my tragic nightmare I have to call reality.

© 2015 Sarah


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it was so vivid, i could actually see it. your wide beautiful eyes glaring at the ascending sun while your hair falling on your hair and flowing carelessly through the wind. Sand squishing between the toes and sand grains strewn all over your insteps. wonderful description :) and about the content part, Reality indeed is miserable but that's what which makes it beautiful. it's only because of sorrows that we enjoy little blissful things like dinner with loved ones, chatting with friends etc. in the end i'll say wonderful work. keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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it was so vivid, i could actually see it. your wide beautiful eyes glaring at the ascending sun while your hair falling on your hair and flowing carelessly through the wind. Sand squishing between the toes and sand grains strewn all over your insteps. wonderful description :) and about the content part, Reality indeed is miserable but that's what which makes it beautiful. it's only because of sorrows that we enjoy little blissful things like dinner with loved ones, chatting with friends etc. in the end i'll say wonderful work. keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These beautiful sighs melt into the gray madness of the real world, yet your title captures my mind. There are those of us who have survived those dark shadows by holding tight to the world inside us, this "blissful imagination." I hope it thrives in you forever, dear poet. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is something I wrote a couple nights ago while I was thinking about good memories I hope to have to help me forget about the world around me. I hope you all like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is descriptive and beautiful, and I can relate to the feeling, being so at peace in your mind, only to have the real world come back and remind you of how unpleasant it can be. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful writing. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Added on March 1, 2015
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Tags: Beach, imagination, dream, love, hope, wish, Life, believe, thoughts, mind, beautiful

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Sarah
Sarah

Oswego, NY



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Hi! My name is Sarah. I am currently 15 years old, and i'm a sophomore in highschool. I am also very interested in Creative Writing. more..

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