My Heart

Concrete Poem, im not gona put it in the shape on here, but its soposed to be in the shape of a heart.

My Heart

 

My heart

is here for you,

no one but you.

You complete it

and fill it with

your love.

Without you,

I am nothing, nada squat.

My heart

beats strong when you are near.

It cries when you are far.

You are the missing peice of the puzzle,

the sun to the sky,

the stars to the moon.

You help me

through the hard times

and enjoy the good ones with me.

In the future

i wonder what we will be.

Nothing at all?

Or a story

that will soon be?

Reviews

[Sayuri Hiroshi]

You sound like you are in love. It was very romantic. I've never seen that side of you Jon. Keep up the good work. ^_^

[Souls Set Aflame]

wow, this is deep and powerful, i especially liked the line " I am nada, squat." it works really well, nice piece

[Dark Daughters]

Awesome poem and one can imagine it in the shape of a heart

[distefano 401]

aww that's sweet, jon. u should give it 2betta :)