Without you.

(A mess of a dreamer)

I thought time will pass and heal the broken pieces
I thought I'd be brave enough to let it go..
I thought someone else would light up the darkness
that it would be better if I let you go.

I spent half of my time wondering
the other half, I spent it wishing you were here
through the rainstorm, that's all I've been feeling
the ghosts left but I'm still fighting to get over my fears.

And I know, I know..

I'll be drowning in my ocean,
I'll be climbing my own mountain
I'll be lost in some place where nobody knows my name.

I'll disappear in a desert
or maybe discover an ancient treasure
I'll collect all the pictures and put them in a frame
but without you, I know it wouldn't feel the same.

It wouldn't feel the same.

Author's Note

I hope you like my new poem, I'm really proud of this one! :)

Reviews

[Chris]

We bond our memories to the silliest, smallest things... a taste, a scent, a song, a book, a poem - movie - place ...thought. And live in the shadow of our souls and all that's held tight within. You set quite the mood with this one.

And even brought a thought of "Cheers" to mind.

[foufa la perle]

I don't know why but your reviews are always special, thanks a lot!

[Chris]

It's good you have a place - here... you can always come and just be you.

[foufa la perle]

Yes, true! :)

[B. Boileau]

Touching, it struck an emotional cord when I read "The ghosts left but Im still fighting to get over my fears" Nicely written Thank you !

[foufa la perle]

No, thank YOU! That means a lot, really! Thanks for reading my poem. Have a nice day! :)