THE STORM

Its a few words poem

Weigh your load...

Before facing the storm

Check what you know 

before playing any role 

Author's Note

i have stopped writing for a while and i trying to come back so i am just taking it easy on myself by writing short lines

Reviews

[JayceeC]

I keep wanting another line...There is nothing wrong with this but they are so short that I have trouble being satisfied. Id start using these to create strings. Write another two lines about the storm and add it to this. Kust six more words. That said yes we batten down before most storms...I more than most perhaps. I never fully trust them not to tear everything apart...in relationships that is.

[highthought]

will this be ok ?

[JayceeC]

Are you satisfied with the message??..It definitely changed what the reader sees and how it is interpreted.

[highthought]

We face storm almost every day at work , in sociaty , even when we are in the street ,my message was to remind readers to take the best respond ..some people put thier noses in things they don't know about and by doing this they misslead others
Yes the two new lines help to clear the vue

[JayceeC]

I've read some of your longer work and its good. Why do you want to mess with short form? Is it for growth or something different? Short form can be very difficult to master, even for people experienced with it.

[highthought]

i did it just to share in one contest in which we were asked to submit a six words poem...i ve stopped writing long ago because it did take far from real life around me and it causes me hard thinking pain ... i dont know if i ll come back , still thinking

[JayceeC]

I use writing to work through the crap floating in my brain...sometimes it's painful, but I find after I get it down and out I feel better than I did. Maybe just hand out, comment, see how that goes before writing again.

[highthought]

i felt when i first came back to the cafe and reread the reviews sent by writers on my poem that there were a part of me i havent seen for long . with time i can be more specific about that part since a barely put my first foot in it