ONION & PARFUM

Do you bare the smell of the onion??

When onion is his smell,
but, for you it's a perfume,
At then, you can tell......
"I am in love with that man "

Author's Note

ask yourself...

Reviews

[Veronica L. Wadsworth]

Love changes your level of tolerance and perception of everything and everyone.

[highthought]

Love heals from a lot of things .... Only if it s true ...welcome to my page

[Veronica L. Wadsworth]

I guess but sometimes it can totally scorn a person permanently.

[WordShaker33]

This poem was well written, nice job!

[Mockingbird]

if my man smelled like onion i'd still want to be with him. you'll always want to be with the person no matter what...an onion is a little extreme, though.

[Zoe Jay]

Ha, a very sweet and concise philosophy. Well expressed and well conceived. A really nice little capturing of the little things that define and differentiate true love. For neatness, I would keep it to just four lines, so after "...perfume," it would simply read "then you can tell that you are in love with that man". This just reads a bit neater, but that is just me. This is a nice thought and a nice piece of writing :-)

[A]

Lol that is ironically true, love transforms the person you love into an angle with all his flaws, real crazy love more specifically...
smart piece.

[Dawning Creativeness]

It's true. Completely relatable.

[Peony]

So true! If you love someone, it wouldn’t matter if their skin was purple and they had hand sprouting from their forehead, they’d be perfect in your eyes.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Well, onions are potent .. so if you love the man of onion your love is potent.
Clever and thoughtful.

Chloe

[Stef Outsiders]

its short, but clever... i like it!