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[Phill Oz O'fee]

Read a few times and was taken on a different direction of thought each time - your short innovative piece certainly makes the reader ponder (and I love that in a write)! the strongest awareness I had was one of an individuals freedom be shackled by circumstances beyond their control - not certain of what the future might hold .. but that's just me abstract thinking - good poem, great share - :-)

[J. B.]

I love this little piece! great little snippet into your mind :)