Almost Interludes

Almost Interludes

A Poem by Blunt--Instrument
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Desire

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Sometimes we have quiet moments  
Almost interludes
When all the comic stuff falls away
I see your tenderness
It melts  
It's surreal  
It's intimate

© 2022 Blunt--Instrument


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Sweet words about love and how it feels..
Those intimate moments are so very special. And, for some are very rare.
Interesting that you wrote at top "Desire"
because I believe we all desire that sort of marvellous connection in our lives.
Lisa, working on my new Sonnet


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blunt--Instrument

1 Year Ago

I write a lot about love and also desire.
Never ending actually
Look forward to your .. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Well, me too... love..desire...loss...oh yes, and lust..
I posted a poem called Desire...



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This short write reminds me how wonderful those moments are. Tender moments of love when the heart melts and the intimacy starts.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blunt--Instrument

1 Year Ago

Yes, thank you Chris
It’s good to document those moments !
Thank you
Sweet words about love and how it feels..
Those intimate moments are so very special. And, for some are very rare.
Interesting that you wrote at top "Desire"
because I believe we all desire that sort of marvellous connection in our lives.
Lisa, working on my new Sonnet


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blunt--Instrument

1 Year Ago

I write a lot about love and also desire.
Never ending actually
Look forward to your .. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Well, me too... love..desire...loss...oh yes, and lust..
I posted a poem called Desire...

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Added on September 18, 2022
Last Updated on September 18, 2022
Tags: Desire, interlude, attraction, lover, intimacy, tenderness, surreal

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Blunt--Instrument
Blunt--Instrument

NY



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9 years writing poetry All genres from observation to mature themes I specialize in narrative writing often involving humor, desire and slice of life situations.... Abstract artist, all paintings .. more..

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