The Onion

A Book by george

This is a science fiction novel about a pair of teens who accidentally discover an abandoned space ship near their small town. After accidentally activating it they are in for an adventure

Chapters

Eggs and Bacon

© 2013 george

Author's Note

please ignore grammar as this is a 1st draft....I'm looking for basic feedback such as if the story is generally interesting and is it something you'd continue reading.....is my writing style enjoyable or boring, amateurish or at least heading in the right direction?