Page Twenty-Eight

Page Twenty-Eight

What shall I place on page twenty-eight? my loves, my goals, my sorrows? I'm hoping through grace my words (though not great) will still ring true tomorrow My soul flows again from my diligent pen and gathers my thoughts and emotions setting in place a run-away pace that clings to my truest devotion For writing like this - it's an absolute bliss to share with the world my desires So, whatever I place on page twenty-eight it's with hope that I've truly inspired. :)

Reviews

[Franky]

Kind of random! Page 28? I like it. I like the line where you mention absolute bliss (from your creation) nice!

[Thomas W Case]

Excellent work. Keep writing.

[Sharrumkin]

A fun poem dealing with the writing process.

[Mari' Emeraude]

Thank you for reading, Sharrumkin

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing is the hope of writing something that can stay with the reader. Many great writers could do this. I recommend the book "On the beach." Nevil Shute last ten pages will make you cry. I enjoyed your thoughts. Today my muse is alive. Six new poems. We must create when our minds are awake. Thank you dear Mari for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mari' Emeraude]

Thank you, Coyote, for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Mari.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

How about this poem? It would reside quite well on page twenty-eight.

[Mari' Emeraude]

Thank you for reading,
jacob

[John Sullivan]

Really love the rhythm and rhyme scheme of this one... "my soul flows again from my diligent pen" indeed...

[Mari' Emeraude]

Thanks, John. I tried to have it put in a little poetry book so it would be on that page but when I sent it to the publisher, of course, by the time it went to print, it wasn't on page twenty-eight at all! ;p

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, and may page 56 be even better.

[Mari' Emeraude]

:) Thank you, John