Ready for Takeoff

Ready for Takeoff

A Poem by Emily
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This is a poem I wrote for a friend. He is a senior about to graduate in a month, and I wanted to write a short piece about the bittersweet and confusion of finishing high school without being cliche.

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The magpie robin waits
Amidst the leaves of
The potat tree,
Cautiously toddling
Along its branches like
A tightrope walker,
Walking a very thin line that
Teeters between the brink
Of past and future,
The present's headwind
blowing full-force
Against his outstretched wings
As he holds them out for
Balance.

© 2015 Emily


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Emily
What do you think? I would really appreciate some feedback.

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Very strong imagery is used in the poem. It conveyed your feelings loud and clear!
Thanks for sharing. Good work.
Maumil

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 17, 2015
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Tags: highschool, senior, graduation, robin, magpie, birds, nature, metaphor

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I am a 17 year old free lance writer. I'm open for any and all advice so let me have it! more..