Scares and Bruses

The scares will stay forever

The pain will go away

All i needed was someone to stand by me and say its going to be okay

He didnt even care

Not a word was said

And now he is sitting on are bed

Wondering what happened

How did this come to be

He looked at that picture

And started to cry

How come this happend she said she was fine

I guess that wasnt what he wanted

But im still here

Im looking down at you

So down be in any fear

I can still see you

So its okay

Dont cry over me

Ill be okay

Im wishing i was still there

In your arms

But I told you that its going to be hard

Nothing is easy i dont care what you say

Its just like we never met

And that is how it will be

Untill you relize how much i loved you

But till then im always here for you!

Reviews

[Brandon]

I thought it was pretty good. Flowed pretty well, and all together good job.

[Violeta]

alright, good poem. it lacks of details and description but still get me inside the whole scenery, truly don't know how you did that. Good writing is not about rhymes, prose, or complicated phrases, its about being able transmit an emotion to the reader and you did that. keep writhing like that.