how she told me

she talks to me with eager eyes

from dirty thoughts and sad goodbyes 

fervent storms orbit her tongue

asking me why this went wrong

oh baby girl, how should I know?

when actually you told me so

not with hands, nor with your words

but in the way you looked at her

Author's Note

can you guys help me out? I'm unsure about the last line's ""in" the way you looked at her."
is "in" right, or should I rather use "through"/with"?
(English is not my first language)

Reviews

[RAOrourke]

I love the rhyming and pace of this poem and yes "in" is the appropriate way to get across the last line. Very nice!

[Sami Khalil]

A good rhyming poem...:)....................