Miles Away...

Miles Away...

A Poem by Jorj Jie
"

Away from family/love/hubby/wife/etc

"
I pray to God Almighty
So He would bless you daily.

For you're so far ...
away from me.

I feel so sad...
It makes me lonely.


The nights are just ...
so hard to bear.

It's just too difficult...
when you're not there.

Trying to beat ...
this stage of adjustment.

We both need more ...
encouragement.

I know I cannot...
always complain

But hope that we..
will beat this pain.

One day we will be...
off the hook

Let's not be sad...
Hey,we got face book! =)

© 2013 Jorj Jie


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Your poem has the same title as one of my very favorite music Artist, Mr. Jackson Br please write me when you are online again. You have tremendous talent!!!!! Thanks for friendship.!!!!!! I am thrilled wit your work.... and am reading all of it if time permits tonight!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

Thank You Leah :) Your review brings smile to my face. What a nice surprise to start my day. I'm spr.. read more
Leah 1

11 Years Ago

Write from the Heart, HOW do we put videos on the work we do? YT TY I am alsoon facebook..private ms.. read more



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The nights are just ...

so hard to bear.

It's just too difficult...

when you're not there

.............these lines are very nice. enjoyed. best wishes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

thank u so much! :)
Your poem has the same title as one of my very favorite music Artist, Mr. Jackson Br please write me when you are online again. You have tremendous talent!!!!! Thanks for friendship.!!!!!! I am thrilled wit your work.... and am reading all of it if time permits tonight!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

Thank You Leah :) Your review brings smile to my face. What a nice surprise to start my day. I'm spr.. read more
Leah 1

11 Years Ago

Write from the Heart, HOW do we put videos on the work we do? YT TY I am alsoon facebook..private ms.. read more

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Added on April 26, 2013
Last Updated on April 29, 2013
Tags: long distance relationship

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Jorj Jie
Jorj Jie

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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I'm not a Professional writer. I just write whatever comes to mind. Sometimes when I am happy or sad or inspired I put it all into writing. So please bear with me :) more..

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