Night

Night

A Poem by gman
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Reflective

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Already the day has turned to night,
and the future does not look bright.
This is the time my fears strike home,
chilling my body to the bone.
I know I will be alright,
I just have to wait for the sunlight.
I'll be fine wait and see, 
there is nothing that can hurt me.
But one day there will be no more fun,
that is the day when life is done.

© 2016 gman


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Good one. Last line missing"the" That is THE day when life is done.
Sounds quite sad and nostalgic. Loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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