The cabin in the clouds

The cabin in the clouds

A Poem by giovannym

The cabin in the clouds

In awe I was staring up at the sky
looking, staring, at the glaring object so high
it was a cabin, nestled gentle in it's place in the clouds
How did it ge there? almost out of nowhere

Did God place it there? 
Up so high, it seems so far, so unfair
I'll build me a ladder on top of a chair
am I closer? what if I stretch my fingertips further?
I placed ladder upon ladder and chair upon chair 
in hopes of getting closer and high up in the air
beware of the wind as i'm rocking and moving
the chair is bending and breaking no time to repair

There is a cabin up in the clouds
how it got there and is it allowed?
I must get up there, to visit the cabin
inside there are secrets and wishes
my fate and future await me
I must get up there, to visit the cabin


the wind, the sun, the elements
try to prevent me from reaching the cabin
my music, my love, my future, give me the hope that I will be there
I need to meet her in the cabin
where the memories will become lovely patterns
my future is there and I will make it, please God let me get to the cabin
I will fly if I have to, I need to be there

I'm not too late and the cloud will wait there
I need to meet her in the cabin
ah she's there, I will be here

© 2015 giovannym


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What a wonderful imagery filled calming piece! I love the creativity and
written very well! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

giovannym

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words Jamestown, I'm very happy you enjoyed it :)

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giovannym
giovannym

Moreno Valley, CA



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Name is Giovanny, i'm just a guy from California that has always scribbled things when I try to express what I'm feeling. I usually end up losing my scribbles, but lately going through some difficult .. more..

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