Bun

Inspired by that one guy.

The first smile, nervously meeting your eyes,

taking in each little detail of your face.

Brief, not even for a minute, shifting my gaze.

Contagious, feeling your energy hitting my chest,

my head in the clouds while trying to find the adjective

to describe just what is on my mind.

I melted.

Verb and truth perfectly placed together in a coherent sentence.

I melted.

Few days prior and even the truth would never have surfaced

Always close by, around the facts bombarding my mind

Emptying contents no longer valid, lifting me little at a time

No need to rush, baby steps will hold me steady

Sometimes I'm not ready, all in all, it'll make sense in time

Bust a quick witty little rhyme.

Smile just before you leave, intriguing me

The first touch left me wondering where have you been

Where do you go, can I be the one to hold your hand?

You put my words on this steady flow, keeping tempo with the beat

Waking the questions sleeping on my mind, the wants between

the needs

Dreams and all the ambitions, let's kick back and take a listen

Where the journeys been and where do they go,

Deep in the night, pen to paper, floating with the smoke

Keep the rhythm with me, don't miss a beat,

We got the chance to make this gold. 

Author's Note

Wrote this off two beats, not very fond of the ending, but until the next wind of inspiration.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

I like it :) I like the flow and the content... finding that someone special that makes you blush and feel all warm and fuzzy inside haha It's a great feeling when you find that connection you are looking for :)

[Ms. Twitch]

Thank you! I appreciate the kind words! It's an awesome feeling to know you can still feel again too :)

[McBear]

Woo! I loved the butter smooth flow; went well with this poem. I loved the rush of feelings that are conveyed here :) Well done!

[Ms. Twitch]

I loved how you described the flow haha thank you very much for the kind words :)

[McBear]

Hehe, yeah. Yeah, my pleasure. Thank YOU for writing this.

[alifeacoustic]

Waking the questions sleeping on my mind
and the last verse, which you aren't fond off, totally rock.
great smooth flow, with all the dreams, if's, buts and maybes in between.
Love it :-)

[Ms. Twitch]

Thank you! I also appreciate the positive comment on the ending haha I wasn't sure if it went well with the overall flow or just abruptly ended it.

[alifeacoustic]

I think it went well :-)