Rain Rain

RAIN RAIN

 

 

 

 

OH PLEASE

 

 

 

 

PLEASE STAY

 

 

 

 

AND NEVER

 

 

 

 

EVER GO AWAY

Author's Note

Probably my best poem XD

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

I agree with Cynthia! It's sweet and short with a nice bounce to it. :)

[Cynthia]

I agree with you, simple and short, yet the beat of the poem is bouncy>< Haha, I love this poem really much, its really cool :)
Great Job!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

If this is your best then you must not live in a flood plain or where hurricanes are a serious threat It's a neat poem though

[Keevan]

Simple and short. :D Wonderful. :)

I rate thee 100!