Sydney

Sydney

A Poem by Miss Sally Sunshine

My dark angel

My sister

I trust you

 

I trust you with my heart

To not use that power

To hurt me

 

But each day it seems

You abuse that power

And I crumble bit by bit

 

My dark angel

My sister

I trusted you

 

Slowly I pull my heart back

You're losing it

Forcing me to take it

 

I don't like the stabbing

I don't like the laughter

We were supposed to last forever

 

Dark angel

Sister

I trusted you

© 2011 Miss Sally Sunshine


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This gave me literal goosebumps. I love how you used Dark Angel to describe your sister, it gave some imagery to the poem.
The best part is that I can relate to this. It's exactly how I felt with my mother.
Great job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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