Understand?

Understand?

A Poem by Miss Sally Sunshine

I don't care

I don't care

I don't care

 

You like him?

Fine

You want him?

Fine

He's cute?

Fine

 

You want to hang with him?

Fi- wait,

Instead of me?

 

No. No, no, no, no, NO.

You can't just do that

Choose him over me

 

I knew you first

I was there through it all

Holding your hand

 

You think I'm trying

To control you?

COME ON!

 

You will NOT throw me aside

For some boy

Who will eventually disappear

 

Goddammit listen to me!

F*** your history with boys

Chuck it out the window

 

This is about you and me

About you not trusting me

Or caring about me

 

Did you honestly think

I would be okay hearing

You were making other plans

 

Usually, I would be okay

I would step out of the way

With parting words "Go get him!"

 

But not when I know him

Better than you,

I might add

 

He's just a flirt

Doesn't want commitment

Doesn't want you, doesn't care

 

But instead of forgetting the boy

You forget a friend

And still you dont understand

 

 

© 2011 Miss Sally Sunshine


Author's Note

Miss Sally Sunshine
Im sorry for the strong words... I wasn't the happiest of campers when I wrote this... I was going through a rough patch with a friend, and well, this is what came out of it :P i hope you could actually feel what I was feeling... I tried to add as much feeling into the words as I could :P and review would be fine :) and constructive critizism is welcome, we can all improve here or there :)

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i love it and yes i could feel what you meant but also because i was there before...it sucks when your friend doesnt realize how important your friendship actually is...nicely done and sometimes we have to use that wording to get our emotions across

Posted 12 Years Ago



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