64 dB of Gastric Ruin

64 dB of Gastric Ruin

A Poem by Paul Shannon

Lackadasical bovinary cooking coddle

A ransacking of the olfactory cavities



An oilseed dish pulverized and granulized

Heterotrophic morphology organized and chromatized


Immunic biological defense system aberrant

Basophil projectile

Proteins unleashed, foreign pathogens engaged

Histaminic arenization, epidermic localization

Fibrous nerve pruritis reflex

Reactionary classification Type IV

The recoil of gastric spasms, wrenching ulcered esophagus erodes

© 2019 Paul Shannon

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When Dom showed me this, I told him to let me guess the meaning. My guess was vomiting after eating a cheeseburger. He told me what he knew about it, but I'm still curious about the title.
"Is the sound of vomiting 64 decibels?"
"It might have just been a 'loud' experience."
But all right, keep your secrets.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Paul Shannon

3 Years Ago

Close, it's about eating something you're allergic to.
You don't see a lot of people using poetry generator sites these days

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Paul Shannon

3 Years Ago

Especially in this case since I didn't use one, but thanks for the non-constructive criticism

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Added on October 16, 2019
Last Updated on December 10, 2019


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