Random Rhyme Poem?

Random Rhyme Poem?

A Poem by Jack Glasgow
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Hello, this is the first poem i've ever written...and it's nonsense. Nothing makes sense in it, i wanted to make rhymes because rhymes are nice. i'll make something than makes sense later :P

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This poem of sheer beauty
It is but my mere duty
Skillfully cut my foe with a sword
i easily reduce the enormous horde

The hours quickly fly
as the enemy dies
i leave my computer and off my seat
because mum called me to go eat

but a man called for me
and he gives me some tea
he offers me some good lunch
and i give him a good punch

i wake up from a dazzling dream
and discover a seal ate my cream
my phone rings exactly when i stand
and a ninja gives me a hand

my fantastic random rhyming skills
most definitely count as kills,
the ninja turns on my playstation
and a monster goes on vacation

some flaming idiot blew me away
but the ninja keeps him at bay
when the man came to say bye
he quickly met the sky

the morning came and the sun rose
and the idiot turned on the fire hose
but that was yesterday at school
when some guy was playing it cool

but quickly the night arrived
and the moon proves the day died
as i look up at the evening stars
i pretend to discover Mars

an idea for a story comes to mind
the protagonist is already in a bind
when the antagonist loudly laughs
while his little sister does some crafts

the inspiration died and i felt barren
before some guy called me Darren
and he tells me this poem makes no sense
but it made the reader all tense

some guy said this poem is weird
and my ninja cuts off his beard
but his pants also disappeared
before the monster reappeared

a blond man took center stage
after he quit of minimum wage
spreading innovation and revolution
in a world full of pollution

this lengthy poem lost its rhyme
so it may be just about time
to end it here and take it down a notch
'coz there is formula one to watch

© 2013 Jack Glasgow


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Nice rhyming. I like the way you use it to tell a story. I enjoyed reading it extremely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A good random rhyming poem...Keep it up...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


I actually enjoyed this poem. It really was a good read and I just loved it. I'm sure that once you get the hang of writing poems, they would start to make sense. With me, Rhyming in a poem is difficult and I always chose to do Free Verse because it's simple really, but as long as you love rhyming it shouldn't really matter. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack Glasgow

10 Years Ago

Thanks! Poetry is not my thing, but rhyming is. Perhaps i will try another poem in the future

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Added on September 28, 2013
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